First of all, I would like to say thank you for creating this game. So, thank you. Now, however, I shall criticize it.
There are several points throughout the game where I was confused due a lack of clarity in the text. There was a point to where I had a choice to make regarding Celia. I had two options, as is often the case, and though I cannot remember the first option, I remember the second being "Challenge". The problem was that I had little understanding as to what each choice meant.
Another point is when choosing between Cornelia and Servila. In this instance, sometimes Cornelia was representative of love and Servila order, while other times it was the other way around.
I also don't understand how alchemy works. Perhaps I missed a tutorial? Either way, any enlightenment and/or insights you would care to share would be most welcome.
I don't know what it is that you do that makes this game work, it might as well be a foreign language. As such, I do not have a proposed solution any of these problems. What I do know is that while reading the game text, I was often confused and lacked understanding in the choices I was making.
Now, I think that's all the criticisms I had to post. However, I have a few requests to make.
Firstly: would it be possible to create hybrid beasts that the player has captured?
Secondly: demonic muscle-girls when?
I hope that you have found this somewhat lengthy post respectable and, well, readable. Again, thank you for making this game and may you have a prosperous day.