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Annon6 years ago

ah right forget the unkept hair, it was a misplaced sprite when she's stressed.

You can just reply here when it's finished and we'll take a look at it.

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Psychoboy7776 years ago

All done!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10xeEPJblSsyQfSiSa25SXI1PapQVh2cEyA_NyHK-y24/...

How is it so far?

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Annon6 years ago (1 edit)

Thanks for your time can definitely work with that! 

It's also great that you devide the sections keeping the dialogue box in mind, kudos for that.

Forgot to link you the DOC files of the previous writer for you to draw inspiration from  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1J50A6Sd67X82CZlJW2Qv92KVC58mnZ9x2-MAhwEeZcs/...

Again your work you've done now is more than enough and appreciated. If anything had to be added it would perhaps be a bit more fleshing out on the growth below her waist, and maybe the very last part would benefit from descriping how the magic just needs to push her one more time for extraordinary results.

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Psychoboy7776 years ago

Sounds good! It'll be a while before I can get to that, but I promise it's on my to do list!

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Annon6 years ago

Sure thing, thanks for your willingness to help out.

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Nomsar6 years ago

Sorry for being so quiet on this, but Annon's right: you're doing good work here, chief!

And seriously, thank you so much for formatting it for dialogue boxes.

I'll see about adding your work to the next update, if not, the one immediately after!

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Psychoboy7776 years ago (1 edit)

Any time! I also threw in those changes Annon mentioned, hope it helps!

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Annon6 years ago

https://imgur.com/a/scPjs 

Finally done with the 3rd transformation.

Ended up reworking on the text and tried to combine it into something a bit more akin to the previous writing, but am honestly not a good writer to really say much but tried to make it work.

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