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I wasn't a fan of this, couldn't find a pause button, you had Vector graphics mixed with pixelart graphics and found the how 2 very long.

Improvements I would recommend are: Keep the art style the same throughout the game, either choose clean vector style images or choose pixelart, make a tutorial instead or as well as a how 2.

Check over your grammar, placement of full stops, capital letters etc.

I will keep playing and edit my review if a have further/changed thoughts.

sorry you did not enjoy it that much but the critique is greatly appreciated 

No problem, I hope you continue with it as the idea could be really awesome, just think you need to lead the player through the experience more clearly.