This has some promising parts and I'm happy to hear you got over a creative block with this. I have two main comments, the first one is that I listened on your soundcloud playlist so I wouldn't have to download, and the tracks are in a different order than you've listed in your description. So I listened to them in the playlist order before realizing this, and then went back and listened to them in your intended order. I think it was a better experience the second time, so I would suggest going back into your soundcloud playlist and putting the tracks back into their proper order.
My second comment echos Yazorius's. Your strongest tracks were the ones where you were able to develop the material a bit. But some of these are just really repetitive loops. I think they would benefit a lot from some more melodic material layered on top. That's just my two cents though. Turnabout was very strong, and Sacred Grove had good vibes. Telling Stories makes a good beginning and end. Hero's Respite was also very effective. I think you just needed a bit more time for the others.