Hello Hobcramwork, just finished your game. I'll leave some feedback, and I hope you don't mind.
The story and theme looks interesting, but it flows a bit too fast: I believe adding a way for the text be scrolled when the player presses a button, so that they have enough time to read, would be a nice addition.
Also, since the game is very simple, I don't there's a lot more I can say... maybe that the jump feels a bit floaty, but that is only my opinion. Looking foward to your next games, to see how you'll develop!