I love a narrative style game and to implement something like this in 48 hours is great. With some improved art and animation you could tell a great story in this format. I lived the scribble drawings by waving the mouse across the page - super simple for a player but still felt like drawing! The game did feel quite slow to me - movement and dialogue particularly. If things were sped up and bit I think it would make it feel smoother to play through. All in all a nice interactive story game!