9 months no update :/
Thank you.
I would like to congratulate you on including the opportunity to have the MC as either male or female, having played through as both I think it does change the feel of the story. Im impressed and a little surprised it isnt a more common thing to do, I appreciate that it is more work, but I am assuming that the story and many of the renders are much the same.
I also wanted to say that I was intrigued by the inclusion of Rachels Story on the menu, is that going to be the same story told through her eyes? Or perhaps the story from when the MC's father was around?
Finally, there are a few things in the text that you might want to look at. (My apologies if you've already changed them.)
Male MC to Rachel "(Damn, she was really just trying to be nice and I was a total bitch...)" - wrong gender
Jada to Male MC "Hehe, bitch..." - wrong gender
Steph "This is the company headquarters, all our prototypes are build and tested here." - built
MC to CJ "Yeah, good bye." - goodbye
MC to Katherine "I've seen you in the city today, you know..." - I saw
MC to Rachel "But don't you think that loosing her best friend would be bad for her, even with me being here?" - losing
Jada "So, were you look for me, or do you want to use the bathroom?" - looking
Hmm, I don't know which version you played, but I can't find any of these errors/typos. Some of the gender specific stuff you mentioned has been working fine for several versions. I can only think of an engine problem, but I don't get these errors, so I can't check :(
Thanks anyway.
Regarding Rachels Story:
It's going to start a little bit earlier than the main story and then will follow along the main story. It will shine some light on stuff that the MC can't possibly know and fill some holes left open by the main story.
Ok, its version 0.6 for Android running on a Samusng Tablet (Android 11) in Landscape orientation, if that helps. As far as Im aware I donwloaded the files from here on itch.io. If you like I will redownload, uninstall and reinstall and do another playthrough.
As for Rachels Story, I look forward to it. I think its a really good idea that I would like to see more of in visual novels.
Ok, the first "total bitch" for male MC text is present in the arm64 version too, it occurs in the scene in Rachels room where the MC asks her to show her tits.
An additional note, something else you have probably already sorted out, in the earlier scene (first pills scene?) where Rachel shows the MC the collection of tools, a reference is made to "it's not even lunchtime..." but Rachel and Ellie have both been out (work/school I assume,) so surely this should be referring to the evening meal, not the midday meal?
Anyway thanks for your replies.