I was a little heartbroken when I couldn't progress as the game crashes before Overlook :c
For the rest, the quality is all in! The art especially, especially in the dialogue scenes. Character designs and backgrounds are on point. And the funeral home dialogue made me laugh my ass off, so yeah, there's some nicely written dialogue too.
The concept for the levels is also interesting. I like the idea of having to hold the umbrella to not get too wet, it gives the player more to think of and be careful when thinking of moving objects. The brain in the jar is also a funny way to illustrate it.
I like that you can pick if the protagonist is sorry or not about his actions.
Ahh, I hope I can see the ending! I wanna finish my forgiveness run!