Great little RPG Maker Game! The story was fun, and I was invested to see the end! My feedback is: Some of the dialogues were a tiny bit longer than I think they should be… and some backtracks were not necessary (the shovel, and the key). Besides that, it was pretty fun!
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Thank you so much for your feedback! I agree that some places probably could have been broken up a bit in terms of dialogue, and I actually had plans to write in some in-between scenes. If my teammate and I ever remake this game in the future, I'd probably want to space the opening out, and write in some more puzzles and gameplay. I'm glad that you enjoyed the story, though, and found it enjoyable regardless!
Glad you enjoyed it!
That's fair.
A couple of wishlist of tweaks for polish week are going to be addressing a couple of those issues.
(A dialogue choice at the beginning so it's not one big back-and-forth, and swapping some event stuff, allowing the shovel to be picked up first time.) The castle bit was more down to me trying to fit two tasks onto one map, which was purely a deadline thing and something I'd like to change along the way.
What I'm most pleased about is you found it engaging, it's great to know that people think the core is solid, even if we could improve on some aspects. It helps us do better on the next go around.
Thank you!