In Shadow:
The 1-6 option should be changed to something like:
1-6 = you are almost done when the World makes a Soft Reaction
“you have done” doesn’t really mean anything here.
Either option seems a little bit weird for concealing your presence (rather than concealing your actions). Maybe something like this would work for both presence and actions?
1-6 = you are almost done or almost out of danger when the World makes a Soft Reaction