The story is pretty nice, but I'm not really sure how it fits with the theme of "You are not the hero". I'd recommend making the story a lot more clearer. Some parts of this were really nice, though, like the chase.
You have a nice set of core mechanics thanks to using the Heartbeast tutorial, but you didn't really do too much with it. You just used the same bat enemy over and over again. Maybe try looking into making more complex enemies, like ones that shoot projectiles, or ones that teleport?
All the levels also feel very the same so it's really easy to get lost and confused. Try adding more designs for levels, and try to make all the areas not big rectangles, add more stuff in the middle, like grass.
I'd also seriously recommend against doing stuff like two player minigames until you get the main game finished, too.
Overall, the game's alright, the game needs a lot more polish. You've got a lot of potential!