Howdy; I like the concept of the game! That said, am I correct that arg-nitive is a portmanteau of argument and initiative? Because I'm not entirely sure about that. I'm also unclear on a few aspects that I think would be easier to understand if they were separated into different sections or subheadings, something along those lines. In terms of design, I think the game would be easier to read with some clearer hierarchy of information (a different, less bold font for the body text would help readability for example). Right now, though there's contrast between some elements, I think even more contrast would be helpful!
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Thank for commenting! Yes, Arg-nitive is argument and initiave. I believe after that I explained how to use it, the name, frankly, is irrelevant.
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Roll for arg-nitive, a d20 whoever rolls highest speaks their argument and go through the order"
The bold font, yeah. I see how some would struggle,
And with only 2 pages to work with for the jam, More headings, I personally think would look quite cluncky.
But, I appreciate the feedback! Happy to know people give my Silly ideas some thought. Haha.