i found the game to be eerie, which is a good thing because it seems like that is what you were going for. I loved the atmosphere that was created in the game by the sounds, music, the graphics and I also loved the element of fear that was instilled by the guards/human control officers, not knowing what was coming if you're caught. Without giving out spoilers, I loved that endings were impacted by the choices you made in the game. The story was well written as well.
My only criticism is not being able to control the dialogue, things such as going back to the previous sentence or going to the next. But i understand that you might have wanted to ensure that the player reads everything to get the full experience of the game and the story.
Well done!(An Ordinary Day - Sabelo Nkwanyana)