I loved how as you progress through the game the effects get more and more unsettling. The sound design, animation elements, art and the image hover elements was a really nice touch and added to the overall atmosphere :). The writing was conveyed well and was an engaging read, but I would have liked to have seen more options in choosing different links to give the player more options and choice as to where the story goes and ends up. Its always fun to see a cool Twine game :D