The way in which you immersed your players in your dystopian world and revealed the creepy narrative was very cleverly done. By hiding information you also added some replayability to the game (I didn't realise that you could view emails too). The atmosphere created by the lighting and sound was extremely effective in creating tension and atmosphere. If I were to nitpick I would maybe suggest that the player could click through the dialogue to progress so that they could go at their own pace and really absorb the story. However, I really enjoyed the experience and I appreciate the thought you put into the narrative and structure.
Well done Jack!
- Juliette Love, Four Old Men