Your story is thought-provoking and made going through the narrative an interesting experience. Your art was impressive for the time frame, and the sound effects added a nice level of immersion. The fact that you could hover over pictures was also a clever addition. What might be a good idea to think about is adding more player agency to the narrative, since if the player embodies the character more through agency then the narrative will have more impact.
Overall, it was a really cool experience. Well done!
-Juliette Love, Four Old Men