I really liked your game it captured the feel of old rpgs with it's graphics
I played until the I got the first citizen and you train with her, didn't know what to do after
Pros:
Graphics they were as good as you can be on a gameboy and fit the game really well
Sound: absolutely great sometimes it was missing in some places (house), but all the times it was there it was catchy and just fun to listen to
Humour: The dialog was probably the best part of the whole game, if you could fill a whole game with that level of dialog I'd gladly play a full length game with them
Cons:
Gameplay: I think even though the dialog was great the game needs somekind of gameplay mechanic to keep the players hooked
Grammar: This really wasn't that big of a problem but there were a few grammar mistakes that should be changed if you ever wanna fully release it
In conclusion the progress you made within the two weeks is really stunning and I hope you keep working on it :)