The voice acting, sound, and the story were the strongest aspects of the game. Visuals were good, too. I would've been interested to see how the story continued. The sound design was great all around.
Mechanically, I would've like to see more done with the time mechanic. I would've liked to see something that made the game feel unique. I didn't really see a strong tie to the theme at all, though I know that was sort of part of the story.
I bet you could have made something pretty impressive if you had a little more time to work! This is a solid project for the time you had!