I like the writing a lot (flex-flex-flex) and the way you integrated Lore/Blue Magic skills into the starting fight was very well done (flex-flex-flex).
Battles were to difficult so in the end I couldn't finish it. Needs a bit more balancing.
Lots of cute ideas though and chalk full of Harold goodness!
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Little Issues I noticed when:
1) When you leave the tutorial fight and go to the castle (Castle Em'Vie), you're still facing down. It's awkward. This is true of other places too.
2) It looks like the guards in front of the throne have part of their heads cut off.