Upfront I'm not a visual novel person but wow for a jam I'm impressed. Obviously the game is unfinished but the polish on display for what is there is quite impressive. I'd say that I didn't feel much incentive to explore all options for exposition considering the limited nature of the game, but I really did enjoy what I played. I think the only really lacking part, to me, was the main character's personality. I get that she is supposed to be the audience surrogate but either allowing the audience to forge a personality, or showing who she is, would go a long way in making the game feel engaging. Good luck on the rest of development, let us all know when it's done!