I really liked the setup and how everything was labeled. It made getting around easier. I also really liked the inclusion of the gender-fluid character, but Leo can miss me with that TERF poop. Hopefully she learns the errors of her ways ;P Still, a fun little setup for a magical girl tale that has me curious what will happen next.
Suggestion: It kinda takes a while to get to the really cool stuff, so maybe speed it up a bit.