Thank you for playing! I know, right! Dreams can be frustrating, both as a writer and a reader. I wrote a lot of poetry in college about dreams and delusional states of being, and the execution was really hit or miss. I think the reader needs something concrete to attach to, or else there won't be any stakes. I tried to approach this game from the perspective of someone with dementia, and how they would perceive the world around them: mixing memories, dreams and abstractions of reality.
I'd love to add audio. In my head everything is narrated by the Disco Elysium narrator!
I'm excited to check out your game!