Wonderful, had some great Red Dwarf vibes, I enjoyed the Rimmer-like incompetence and cowardice of the main character! Also impressive amount of writing and art for such a short amount of time!
Sometimes there were walls of texts, and I feel like these could have be delivered in a more paced way. I think the first part with the minister is a good example, where single choices were used to pace the writing. In the later sections, more of this would have helped pace things out more.