Heyyyy Pyrrhalphis! Your feedbacks and criticisms are very welcome! Dont' worry at all, you have been quite nice in saying what you think.
I've been looking for some beta-readers but they couldn't check out the text in time, so I just had to... translate it from Deepl and throw it in the code. Our Editor gave us some beta-reading but as there was not much time left, and the fixes she put were huge, I couldn't check out the text in time as well. I also... uhm am a bit unsure because I found out that I don't like other people twisting my writing too much, so I'm not comfortable with a beta-reader that takes all the text and rewrites it, so I need to trust someone now in order to ask them to help me with the english T__T
This made it more difficult for the dialogue to be english-wise correct. But I hope I'll find a good solution for that, and thank you for the feedback because you're helping a lot with this :)
By the way, I am incredibly happy that you appreciated the visuals, and the frame and all, and I'm happy that I shared this with you! After a bit of a break, I'm sure we'll go back to taking care of the game for next chapters!