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I don't know if i'm alone on this, but for this novel specifically, we keep bouncing from a POV to another. There's no need to do player x whoever when we can just experience guest 5 POV x guest 3. The MC, being a self insert, isn't allowed to have much of a personality anyway.

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so true^^,  its really cool we can appreciate the side characters POV rather than the MC itself. imagine when we shift back to asterions POV, we appreciate more of his burdens before going back to MC that tries to debate on them with different values of the mdoern day agenda.

oh and one good sample is Nikos perspective if you did the ruthless route

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That's pretty much what we thought of, actually. Changing the POV is not the same as writing a whole route for them, but the idea is letting people experience something like it in a way that fits the story. Kind of like what we created between Oscar and Pedro, where you can basically enjoy the story of getting closer with Oscar as long as you can place yourself in Pedro's shoes.

I really like that and thinks that's awesome rather than making it a complicated and messy, especially after Asterion already been through so much