This is an exceptional entry, very creative and well refined gameplay. You could have sold me this as an actual title from the 80ies. The funny quotes on death are a great touch and give motivation to replay and read another one. The visuals are charming and very coherent and readable.
It is a complete jam experience in my book, but if I had to point out a thing to improve, I'd pick the sound. It feels a bit agressive and cold to me. I do not think it's bad but I think this is the field where you could improve the most.