Congratulations on completing your first game :3 That in itself is a huge achievement because so many people say they want to try and do things, some never even begin, some start and then give up, but you made it!
I love the way your draw expressions on your characters. They're really emotive, and the creepy smile faces were especially awesome :3 Sadly, I can't even draw a good stick man, let alone anything else >.<
SPOILERS
I wasn't expecting the eye animation near the beginning, which was pretty cool! And I thought it was awesome how you changed your sprite poses with the gun to her head. It helps up the tension and make everything seem more like it's in the moment :3 I got the path of forgiveness ending first time.