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Really cool! Haven't played a text adventure as part of a game jam (or really at all, actually). Nice descriptions and writing. And I actually found the game to be quite visually pleasing! The little animation between cities was nice and the background generally helped you feel like you were in the setting, along with the music & sound effects.

I think my biggest piece of critical feedback is that it would be nice to have some sort of goal up-front? To provide a little bit of direction. And it seemed like each city was exactly the same - I wasn't sure how to progress?

Also, I think that having a little sound effect when clicking would go a long way with this game since there's so much menu navigation.

This inspires me to want to try my own text adventure, well done!

EDIT: Ohhh just saw the description on the game page, I understand the goal now.

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Thanks for the feedback! Adding menu sound effects is a good suggestion - the menus are a bit bland! 

Yes each city is the same for now - would be nice to add a bit of character to each one but I didn't have time for more.