I was really surprised at the length of the story in this with it being the first visual novel you guys made :D Congrats on getting it out there! Like CrazyCowLady, I noticed one of the options had (WIP) on it, so I clicked the one that didn't and eventually ended up with the natural ending. And also like CrazyCowLady mentioned, I noticed some of the errors but it's honestly amazing that you managed to write it all in your mother tongue and then translate it to English in time for the end of the jam! Translation work certainly isn't easy, so every time I've come across a game in this jam that was translated, I'm just amazed by all the work that's gone into it! For me personally, I didn't find that it interrupted my reading anyhow because I could understand everything that was going on just fine :3
I really adore the art! the lack of colour really helps with the bleak atmosphere of what would have indeed been a very bleak time to live :3
I didn't realise you guys made Rubbish Rive Dash too! Although the game page says there's nothing uploaded to play, I did put the description text into Google translate to see what it was about + I downloaded the html.rar just to see if there was a way to play. I couldn't find one, but I saw like the assets and stuff, and Olivia looks so cute in the boat :3 It's such a sweet idea for a little game! And also really important in this day and age where more and more of our waterways are being polluted with rubbish >.<