Thank you for such a lovely comment. I'm glad you liked the music, I do too. Next time I'm gonna get it to work with the reading so it's more immersive and cued so that everyone can hear the bells at the end!
I think it's pretty similar feedback people are giving me: foreshadow stronger. I think it's kind you read again but a lot of people beyond developers probably wouldn't so I'll work on making it clearer. Thanks for the feedback x
Hahhaha I love that you play DnD, it's maybe my favourite thing beyond my doggos. Would you have saved him from prison?