Oh WOW. Like magic, the music's final bells tolled as I read the last page. Though I know that was due to pure luck and my ridiculously fast reading speed, it added to the tone of the ending and shows how well your music can complement a story when timed correctly (I'm not sure how easy that is to do in Twine so I don't judge how you've posted your final work). Your composing talent shines with this entry! 🎵🎵
I saw on your project page that you mentioned D&D and (because I've been playing D&D a lot lately) I felt like this was being read to me by a DM about an NPC that the party is spying on while deciding whether we should save him from prison.
I want to play a few more times and see the little bits of foreshadowing that I missed. Nice job on this one!