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Cool looking game! Fun music as well :) the pitch is also clear and to the point and gives you a good idea of what the game is. I'm not sure what the "looks simple, feels real" tag line is all about though and it feels unnecessary imo.

I'd redo your video to be closer to the action as it's quite hard to see the action at the size Twitter is showing it. You could zoom the camera in and remove the dead air on the sides perhaps? At least for some of the time.

The press kit looks good too. Programmatically generated is often referred to as procedurally generated by the way (i.e. randomly generated each time).

Thanks for the feedback♥️. On the video I wanted to give the footage of the real game, which is supposed to be played on mobile in portrait mode. Do you think it is ok to show it not the way it actually is?

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Totally get your point, and it certainly does show off the fact it's on mobile in portrait :) I think you could show some of the clips in portrait as you are here to show that it's on mobile, and then have some cuts closer to the action. That way you'd get the best of both worlds (not misleading, but still getting closer to the action). That's be my two cents anyway :)

Thank you, very good point