Clean, concise pitch that gets me pumped about the game. Great work!
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Kanyon Karver Pitch's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall Pitch Quality | #1 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Clarity | #2 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Unique Selling Point | #9 | 3.600 | 3.600 |
| Engagement | #10 | 3.533 | 3.533 |
Ranked from 15 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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- Feedback submitted as Indie Legion.
- Very clear pitch and press kit.
- Good tweet and solid press kit. Stand out entry! Suggestions: -- Include key details like Free Game and Available to play now on Web & Android. -- Needs a Call to Action: Include your #1 link and what you want them to do ie Play now on Web / Android. -- Video is great. You can use Twitter Ad Cards to make your video into a link. Join the Indie Legion Discord to find out how.
- Where do I start, I think you are very well-equipped for the pitch and it SNOWS very much, so kudos for that ;) While I personally question why anyone would do sick tricks mid-air during the middle of an avalanche. But it's out-of-the-box and that's precisely what made it different! It got the drop on me, which is more than what I can say about that final surprise XD
- Nice emoji usage and straightforward pitch. I wish the game could be in landscape format so you could use up all of that visual real estate.
- I would like to see more emphasis on the unique selling points earlier in the description Programmaticaly geneated unique tracks. Unique speed and direction control system. Quick game sessions.
PitchYaPitch Tweet
https://twitter.com/Kanakro13/status/1452251259050811399?s=20
Press Kit Link (DevLog Update)
https://kro13.github.io/presskit
Itch.io Game URL (DevLog Update)
https://kro13.itch.io/kk
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