A stand out entry! The game sounds great and the visuals are amazing!
Suggestions:
-- Improve the clarity and consistency of your pitch.
-- Cut back on level of detail down to the core points.
-- Ensure there is an accessible Press Kit that doesn't require downloading and unzipping. Zip files should be saved for full kits including high res media etc.
-- Grab a copy of Press Kit Lite and start with that. It should help you to refine your pitch to key details. Sharing that will make it more accessible for most streamers, etc and they can then delve further for more information.