The setting of this game is so awesome! Using this as a base game, it has so much potential to become something more unique and interesting than what is out there IP wise. I honestly think you should pursue this beyond the 1 page limit.
I feel the adherence to the theme is a little bit weak, but mechanically it works, is fast paced which you want for jam games, and is just a cool idea. Loving it!
Keep it up!