This game has some of the most polished gameplay and level design of any of the games this jam.
Graphically, I really like the Fox, and the way he rotates his head when you move his feet. The textured grass also looks very nice. It would have been nice to see a cooler backdrop that had a bit more depth.
The music track is really good. This game has the 2nd best music. It would be nice to have more sound effects to really give the player more feedback and bring the world to life.
The humor and 4th-wall commentary is pretty fun.
Gameplay wise, it would be been nice to communicate more clearly to the player what controls are available, and what the signs do. Those aren't the most discoverable. I didn't realize they were checkpoints until after full-level restarts a whole bunch of times.
Also, be nice to power-gamers and give them a button to fast-forward or skip dialogue if they like. Especially for repeat playthroughs.