Hey the page look very white so add some graphics in the bg and try more fonts, you can look at my project page in my profile for a quick idea. very excited to play your game.
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I agree, could use something there. This might be a good font for the titles: https://www.dafont.com/capture-it.font?l[]=10&l[]=1&text=LORE