Thank you for you comments! I am still in the relatively early stages of learning about music production so there are certainly things I could do better, I will take your notes into consideration.
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Yeah, don't worry about it too much if you're relatively new to this then ^^
it's a marathon, not a sprint
And if you feel that my notes aren't conducive to your vision, feel free to disregard them entirely :)
The most important thing is that you don't turn it into a chore, you have something going on and a very creative way to put it together and that's already something to be celebrated ^^