Thanks fren
It's a recurring feedback, we're including clarity in our list of stuff to polish
Love your game btw! Very charming ^^
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Yeah, don't worry about it too much if you're relatively new to this then ^^
it's a marathon, not a sprint
And if you feel that my notes aren't conducive to your vision, feel free to disregard them entirely :)
The most important thing is that you don't turn it into a chore, you have something going on and a very creative way to put it together and that's already something to be celebrated ^^
It's really nice, there are really cool shifts in intensity and ambiance and it shows that you really know how to use all the plug-ins and samples and instruments present here
Some production hiccups here and there but they are easily justified by the general vibe
it's not trying to be more than what it is : A balanced and well-composed OST
and it ends up being very effective in conveying the message behind the music ^^
It's sounds so good man :o
I love the arrangement, it really feels like traversing a forest with all the inhabiting animals and birds
it has this kind of majesty you get from looking at a beautiful natural landscape, it's beautiful !
I probably would have played with the volume and the reverb of the sax to make it go on the background and support the main melody, it's kind of "in your face" at some times, but maybe this is a choice, in which case feel free to explain : i'm all ears ^^
Okay :
Your composition and orchestration chops are shaaaaaaaarp !
you really know your stuff, you know how to be delicate and create ambiance, you went modal which makes you kind of an exception here.
And i think you made that with only LABS instruments which is awesome and demonstrate that compositional chops are the most powerful tool !
Really the only negative i have is the strings
unfortunately they are not really programmed that well and if it's the LABS strings i think the instrument itself doesn't reach the quality necessary to fit in your musical vision for this ost.
Now i want to stress that : it's not your fault that you don't have the SUPER UBER strings library of our collective dreams because : those things cost a lot of money to buy them and time to learn how to use them...
But i think in order to serve the production quality, making the choice to ditch the strings for another instruments that could fill their shoes could have been better
Except for that instrument, it's beautifully composed and arranged and i wouldn't be surprised if that was an ost for an actual game in the near future ^^
The addition of the sound effects are really endearing ^^
each track has it's character and some are the best kind of cliché (the kind where you absolutely know that you didn't took it seriously and was in for the laugh too ^^)
the transition being baked into the music shows that you thought about the cohesiveness of this OST, also i want to celebrate your ability to create really effective melodies and to support their presence in the track !
It's really a nice little journey.
Man you really mangled those sounds x)
I really like the strange composition! it has a real metal feel !
Although sometimes the melodic lines have a very nice and particular contour but the instrumentation stays the same under it
I think because of that, some climax and transition can lose power. as i listen i thought there was a few missed opportunity to make something absolutely epic
The level of production is a bit where it suffers the most, we can certainly hear the terrifying heaviness in potential but not in the actual music
and there are some things where you don't really know if you kept it intentionally or not (clipping sounds for example)
The sound design is great you really experimented in trying to make us hear "strangeness" and that's really commendable as an artistic gesture :)
it just needs that production polish to really makes us feel what you want to make us feel
Thank you so much man ^^
I think i'll edit my description to put in the librairies, lots of things are free or cheap (and others are kind of expensive)
Thanks for the compliment on the melodies, i nitpick and try to make everything flows but it's always super nice to hear that i didn't hallucinate the music sounding good x'D
Re-listening to your submission, i think you have nothing to worry about considering your chosen aesthetic (which is dope btw) :)
the orchestral parts you made really do what they have to do under the synth scape, it's nice and heavy and it gives poise to the music ^^
Thanks for that journey man
You have really a nice way to accommodate silence which is something i lack a lot
Especially in the Spring part which is very contemplative and graceful
I'd be really interested in talking music with you ^^
we seem to have a bit of the same references
And i'm happy that you went through the process of reconnecting with writing music with intention, it's a labor of love, and it takes a lot out of us
it's nice to see someone aiming toward striking the balance :)
The images you describe in the synopsis fit really well with the music ^^
it's like a free cam tour of an underground city where the fake suns are being forged while the city brims with light, and some places where you can see the acid rain fall
And it doesn't hurt that your brand of EDM is dark, aggressive and very well produced too !