One of the things I like is how it could be used as something cathartic (hey, mourning a place is REAL), or something more lighthearted (a group of transplants reminiscing is a very common thing in my experiance). Great job!
OMG thank you so much!!! Yeah, I 100% started off just trying to be a snarky jerk but as I made it I couldn't do it, I had to inject some of the love of a small town in the middle of nowhere lol. The way you said that was absolutely PERFECT, and I couldn't be happier to read it
