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  • Use of Theme - 3
    • I understand what you were going for with the file recovery but it kind of feels like a lazy implementation of the theme imo.
  • Gameplay - 2
    • The game is very simple. Move the player and collect the files while dodging the moving obstacles. I found a few issues though. In a top down game not being able to move the player diagonally feels very weird. If i press up and right key at the same time im expecting the character to move diagonally, or at least start moving in the direction of the key i pressed last. Another issue i found was sometimes when i died i couldnt click on the buttons to restart the game and ended up having to refresh the page to boot up the game again. The level design was also very flawed with some later stages being easier than previous ones. I think these are problems easy to fix and would make the game a much better experience.
  • Creativity - 3
    • The concept is interesting, and i appreciate the diversity of obstacles, at least visually. Also good job on diversifying the levels. It made the game more intersting.
  • Art - 3
    • The art is very simple which i think was the intention. I didn't understand what the little transistors/batteries? and broken walls were for.  They were all just different types of walls?
  • Sound - 1
    • No sound.

For your first game is not bad at all! You can keep going and improving with experience for sure!

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Thank you for the generous scores and thoughtful feedback. I didn't want to give the player the ability to move diagonally, but I also wanted to change the movement entirely. The battery looking things are capacitors and were intended to be flavorful walls. The broken tiles were also just walls to give character to the level. Originally it was supposed to be more apparent that you are inside computers and electronics. That's why everything looks like PCB's. I wanted to add more components to make the levels more interesting and change the capacitors to be the places the sparks move between. Thank you for reviewing my game so thoroughly