Very nice. I would like to play it immediately. I has potential and it’s climatic. The inconvenient is that I didn’t understand the rules. When it explains the challenges rolls, the “x”‘s explanations got me lost. It’s a pity. Maybe it was me, but I reread several times and didn’t catch it.
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Hi, I am glad you are excited about the idea. So the problem might be my poor English, I'm still trying to figure out an effective way to translate this, but for example: You will make a Vigor [V] test, and you have 2 points of [V], so you will roll 2 dice.
Okay. Before you roll, you must bet (choose) a number between 1 and 6, let's say you chose number 3. This means that for you to succeed on your roll, one of the two dice rolled must equal 3. If neither of them is equal to the number you bet (chose) you fail.
If you wish to spend 1 point of your Fury [F], you may bet (choose) 2 numbers, instead of just 1, for example: You choose 3, and spend 1 [F] to also bet the number 5, so if any one of the dice rolled gives a result equal to the numbers you chose, it is success.
What do u think? U get it?
Don't worry, if you have any more questions, please let me know, your feedback helps a lot! In the next few weeks I will try to hire a professional translator, for this and other games I have published, I haven't done it yet, because in my country it is expensive.
Well, I hope that you have a lot of fun!
Maybe in the community someone can help you. You help him with design of a game, for instance, and (s)he helps you with polishing the translation. In this case, I don’t think it was an idiomatic question, but a confusing meaning idea. It was a little confusing. That’s all. Maybe 4 eyes reading your draft instead of only your two eyes can help and that’s all. :-D