So I’m going to be honest upfront, there are two reasons you should take my feedback with a grain of salt. 1) I’m new in this wonderful hobby, so naturally my sense of what’s right or wrong will not be finely attuned. 2) I have never played Call of Cthulhu which I espect really makes this a different experience. Nevertheless:
Overall I would say, that from a design perspective I like how simple and clean you have kept the text. It would be interessting to see if you could fit it in one page. But overall it’s really a nice map and a well kept grid. The title text is also really interesting and playful, ads to the tone already. Your body text is not my style, I find it a little hard to read, perhaps using a typeface that includes bold and regular could help?
Not having played anything in the Chthulu-genre it’s a little hard to get for me personally. And I was wondering where the players would get all the souls from? Both in 3 and 6 you need souls to sacrifice. But I don’t read any NPCs or monsters – maybe I’m intended to fill that as a GM? I do however appriciate the bit in the end about undoing a misery only for Chtuhulu to awaken, that seems like an interessting trade-off. Who's the lesser evil?
Nice job overall. I'm quite sure that someone more capable than me would be able to give this a great run!
I hope you do not take this as a harsh piece of feedback, it’s just probably my lack of knowledge and experience that left me a little clueless.