Thank you, this was really helpful feedback.
I think you're right, and I may have done a little too good a job hiding the evidence! Of course, to me the obvious clues seem really obvious, because I know what they are. Emphasising them a little more for the players, and minimising the red herrings, is probably a good idea.
Definitely some really good things to think about for the next one. Thank you for taking the time to play it, and to give detailed feedback!