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The game is so freaking pretty! The way the animation looks is so flawless. I feel super jealous of seeing an UI like this.

Anyway, the story was short and sweet. Though I am a bit confused about the age of the characters. From the writing, it seems like they are both children (I'd say around 10-12 or so), but there is an arrange marriage happening within a week? Or did the story leaped a decade or so between Sol meeting Luna? That seemed a bit peculiar to me.

There were a few instances of typos/grammatical errors and some little issue with the code. ("I love you, please don't leave me alone."\"Don't leave me alone, please!") appeared as is on the screen (I think you prob wanted to code that?). $sun.coloreyes didn't show a value to me, just the variable name. "You should stop meeting them," appeared even though I didn't tell my parents about Luna. (did I miss something? Did Sol mention it at one point anyway?).

This was a nice short game :) Thank you for creating it!

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Thank you so much for the kind words!

You're right that the characters were children at the start of the story, but then there was a time skip that isn't as obvious as I hoped it would be. I'll see if I can make it more apparent.

I haven't had much time to properly edit the text (and even if I had more time I'm sure I would not see all errors), so I'm sorry for the grammatical mistakes\typos and I hope that they weren't too jarring!

And thank you for bringing up the coding issues! I only knew about $sun.coloreyes, so the rest is new to me. And unfortunately the "You should stop meeting them," showing up when you didn't tell about Luna is a "bug" too (well, if me forgetting to code it in counts as a bug) - there should have been a slightly different dialog with parents.

Thank you for checking out the game and leaving the feedback! I greatly appreciate it~

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no pb. glad i could help!