Great job with your game! I really enjoyed the story and got invested. I liked puzzles too. That last one was tricky! My favorite aspect of your game was definitely the art. Really cool hand drawn style and I liked notepad paper. Like some of the other players I was a little off-put by the screen shake, but definitely just a minor thing. I think it's a good idea and adds to the game, but maybe just a little more subtle, not that it's particularly aggressive now. Didn't hold back from me thoroughly enjoying your game though!