I love the narrative for this gameplay. You broke the rules in the smartest way possible. The serum causing the user to only be able to make out simple shapes ... so meta to the competition and allowed you to craft a wonderful experience.
I loved it. I think the controls were a little unforgiving, especially for the trickier platforming sections, but the thought and care that went into the narration and the way you accounted for players failing certain sections only to make it easier for them ... so good. Loved this entry. Well done.