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I think you'll find a lot of established writers recommend that - even if it feels boring - sticking with said is best 90% of the time. I've always found this post (https://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/he-said-she-said) particularly instructive on that topic. Don't worry about it too much, I promise!

And totally understood with the ratings system. That kind of thing is tough to implement, so I'm glad you tried and have thoughts on how to rework it.

Oh thanks for the resource! Always looking in way to improve my writing anyway :P