Would have loved to see the work in "Justified" columns. Best line:
Elizabeth, oh Elizabeth, I remember when you, your mother, and your little sister came to my world along with your refugees and the Order that you would soon be inducted into
Yeah this is kind of a sequel to my first story for OPR "Protect the Child at all Costs". So this is the same Elizabeth from that story all grown up (well, she's 18 at this time, a Battle Sister Novice). Glad you liked it!