I kept reviewing yours for last, because I knew how good it was going to be. I had played a tiny bit when it came out (and through out the month) but didn't properly sit down in front of it until now. And holy hell I never wanted to play the next part of a game so much. As someone who is super squeamish about horror/scary stuff, you got me hooked on this so bad (and I mean I knew from the moment I saw your post on Tumblr.
The writing is fantastic, the UI works so well and the music/background noise just adds on to the vibe of the game so flawlessly. I really love the option to just refuse to sign the waver and just being sent back home (I would do that in real life ngl). I know because of the time constraint you could only release one quarter of the path, but it is really done so well.
I don't think you needed the light mode, the dark one just fits the story too much (also had a little issue with the top picture not blending well). A few variables were shown instead of their values ($herself for Max).
So yeah. nothing but praise here.